This design is great because it requires us to move the fewest walls & makes efficient use of the space given. It doesn't cut into the master bedroom size and leaves the top right bedroom a reasonable size. There are a few things that would make this perfect: 1) Access to the top closet from the top right bedroom 2) making the laundry room smaller so the shower can fit in next to it making the bathroom floor plan a little bigger and 3) Making the bathroom door a pocket door. I like your finish choices for the bath the best of all the designers.
Good because least demolition to existing structure. Probably don't need laundry closet double wide. Maybe used that space for shower.